COMMENT LETTER ON PROPOSED RULE

[RULE TITLE]
[AGENCY NAME]

Introduction

Submitter: [NAME/ORG], [INTEREST/ROLE].
We appreciate the opportunity to comment on the above-referenced notice of proposed rulemaking (NPRM).

Summary of Requests

1) [Requested change #1].
2) [Requested change #2].
3) [Requested change #3].
(Include targeted asks; number them clearly.)

Rationale and Supporting Analysis

• Issue 1: [Describe concern], cite rule text page/section.
• Recommendation: [Proposed alternative language/approach].
• Support: [Data, legal authority, operational impact].
• Issue 2: [Describe concern], cite rule text page/section.
• Recommendation: [Proposed change].
• Support: [Data/legal/economic].
• Issue 3: [Optional additional issues].

Proposed Redlines (if providing text)

text
[INSERT SPECIFIC TEXT CHANGES OR ADDITIONS]

Impacts

• Economic/operational: [Summarize cost/benefit; who is affected].
• Compliance/clarity: [Explain how recommendation improves clarity or reduces burden].
• Public interest/health/safety: [Relevant impacts].

Conclusion

We respectfully request the agency adopt the recommendations above and incorporate the proposed text. We are available for follow-up or technical assistance.

Date: [DATE]
[NAME/TITLE]
[ORGANIZATION]
[ADDRESS / EMAIL / PHONE]