COMMENT LETTER ON PROPOSED RULE

[RULE TITLE]
[AGENCY NAME]

Introduction

Submitter: [NAME/ORG], [INTEREST/ROLE].
We appreciate the opportunity to comment on the above-referenced notice of proposed rulemaking pursuant to the Colorado Administrative Procedure Act, C.R.S. Section 24-4-101 et seq.

Summary of Requests

1) [Requested change #1].
2) [Requested change #2].
3) [Requested change #3].
(Include targeted asks; number them clearly.)

Rationale and Supporting Analysis

• Issue 1: [Describe concern], cite rule text page/section.
• Recommendation: [Proposed alternative language/approach].
• Support: [Data, legal authority, operational impact].
• Issue 2: [Describe concern], cite rule text page/section.
• Recommendation: [Proposed change].
• Support: [Data/legal/economic].
• Issue 3: [Optional additional issues].

Proposed Redlines (if providing text)

text
[INSERT SPECIFIC TEXT CHANGES OR ADDITIONS]

Impacts

• Economic/operational: [Summarize cost/benefit; who is affected].
• Compliance/clarity: [Explain how recommendation improves clarity or reduces burden].
• Public interest/health/safety: [Relevant impacts].

Colorado-Specific Procedural Notes

• Under C.R.S. Section 24-4-103, agencies must give at least 20 days' notice before adopting a rule.
• Comments must be submitted during the public comment period as specified in the Colorado Register notice.
• The agency must consider all timely submitted comments and may hold public hearings.
• Final rules must be filed with the Secretary of State and reviewed by the Office of Legislative Legal Services.

Conclusion

We respectfully request the agency adopt the recommendations above and incorporate the proposed text. We are available for follow-up or technical assistance.

[// GUIDANCE: For Colorado rulemaking, check the Colorado Register for the notice publication date and comment deadline. Follow agency submission instructions for format and service.]

Date: [DATE]
[NAME/TITLE]
[ORGANIZATION]
[ADDRESS / EMAIL / PHONE]